Mystery Stuffff

Wow, uh, so I'm assuming this is the last blog post for this school year. Lol can't believe I really thought we weren't going to do any work today in class :((
Okay I'm gonna' get back on track though and talk about my mystery story draft.

So, originally, I had this huge intricate crime planned out. It was genius, and I really took the time and effort to make sure that it was not going to be cliche. I'm pretty sure I succeeded in that, too. But the problem is that I made my plot a little too intricate-- so intricate that it was starting to sound like the plot for a novel rather than a short story. So, I ended up switching ideas to a more comedic story. I'll still be dedicated to the first idea I had though, and I'll probably start writing that up as a book in my free time. But not for class! It's completely recreational !! Are ya'll proud of me !!!!1111!!!
Anyway, my new story is about this guy who sells pickles illegally, because there's apparently this law in Connecticut that if a pickle does not bounce, it's not legally considered a pickle. So, that's the basis of my story. Pahz and I also connected our stories, sort of, using the same detective characters and the same main theme of vegetables. We also used like, one or two of the same jokes for a bit of an extra effect haha

Okay but anyway that's that, I don't really have anything else to say about my stories so uh,, yeah ciao ciaaaao